Sunday, April 3, 2011

'C' is For...?

Jessica Bell and I are A-Z Blogfest writing partners.  Today, we've chosen a word, a noun, that refers to a particular emotion / feeling / state of mind that starts with 'C'.  Based on our fictional paragraph(s), try to guess in the comments what emotion we've depicted.  Here's a hint for mine:  It's NOT the POV character who is 'showing' the emotion(/etc.).  It IS through the characterizations of the other character that you should base your guess.

Here goes:


I expected Catherine Pouvoir to be loud, since everyone who had ever spoken of her to me seemed to use the word 'fabulous.'  So rather than watching the doorway for her to make her entrance, I had my ears tuned while I read over my agenda for the day.  I heard no resounding laughter or boisterous clamour from an entourage, but I knew instantly that she’d arrived.  Every head in the room had turned in the same direction.


She stood in the doorway, indubitably commanding time and space.   Beauty emanated from her like the dazzling flecks of early morning sunlight reflected off the gently lapping water at a lake’s edge, blinding everyone brave enough to stare directly at it.   We all waited for some sort of cue from her, collectively unable to proceed without it.


Glancing at her wristwatch, her angular facial features quickened in comical disbelief.  "Impressive!" she said.   "You all must be incredibly punctual, if I’m the last one here!”  


Appreciative applause, sprinkled with laughter erupted from the room.


What emotion / feeling / state of mind is Catherine Pouvoir emanating?  Any guesses?  Leave it in the comments!  Thanks for reading, and please shoot over to Jessica's blog to read her 'C'emotion-inspired paragraph.  See you over there!

                                    

41 comments:

Glynis Peters said...

Control, came to mind.

Martha said...

Visiting from the A-Z Blogging Challenge. Nice to "meet" you! I'm a new follower. Have a great Sunday and a fun A-Z April :-)

Michael Di Gesu said...

Nice imagery, Nicole. There is only one word to describe this lady and that is CHARISMA!

The Words Crafter said...

I'm with Michael-charisma!

Glynis Peters said...

I came back and read again. Confidence.

Sophia said...

My first thought was confidence, but after reading the other comments I would also accept charisma and charm.
- Sophia.

Theres just life said...

I'm going with Charisma too.

Pamela Jo
http://theresjustlifeyaliveit.blogspot.com

Myne said...

Charisma is what I think too.

Unknown said...

Umm can I choose all of the above! You guys are rocking my socks off!

Erin Kane Spock said...

The POV was a little catty. My first instinct for Catherine was sarcastic but that doesn't start with C. Hmmmm.
Caustic? Critical? Centered, self? Or, if I'm reading her as bitchy and my impression is off she might be commedic or cordial. I don't know, I'm reaching.

Enbrethiliel said...

+JMJ+

Hmmmm. My guess is charismatic!

DiscConnected said...

Like a few others, what came to mind was "confidence" although I'm not sure I'd call that an emotion.

LC

Unknown said...

I agree with "confidence" and "charisma". That's the first thing that came to mind.

Michael Offutt, Phantom Reader said...

I was thinking contempt but I'm probably wrong.

Laura Howard said...

Charisma is my first thought!!

Arlee Bird said...

Charisma was the first thing that hit me.

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Anonymous said...

hmm... yes I would agree with confidence and charisma...

cocky?

nice idea ladies!

Rachael Harrie said...

That's an interesting one. I would have said confidence or charisma, but I don't think they're emotions. So probably "condescending" I think.

Just came from Jessica's blog, LOVE your Challenge idea!!!

Hugs,

Rach

Jessica Bell said...

Great paragraph! :o) PS: I've added, 'emotion / feeling / state of mind" to my posts, as it's true some of the things we've chosen aren't really emotions. :o)

S.A. Larsenッ said...

Ooh, I have to tell you; I'm stumped. Not sure the emotion but a great paragraph!

KM Nalle said...

Countenance?

Another great flash piece.

Jeremy [Retro] said...

clock strikes 13, and the cows eat the grass.
jeremy [iZombie]

explanation:
http://izombielover.blogspot.com/2011/04/c-is-for-comments-and-crazy-charlie.html

Rachel said...

Catty, i think. Canny,...

Martha said...

I was going to say confidence but after reading the other comments and giving it another read I'd have to say charisma too.

Hart Johnson said...

Ha! I didn't know you were doing this too--I caught Jessica at it last week and think it's brilliant.

My guess: Charisma...

jabblog said...

Confident and commanding, I thought.
What an interesting way to approach the A-Z challenge!

Laura S. said...

Confident!

Julia Phillips Smith said...

Charisma, dahling.

RosieC said...

I got a completely difference sense from yours than from Jessica's. I'm thinking contempt, but I'm not sure. Hmm...

Rosie
East for Green Eyes

Soooz Burke said...

Hmm...I'll go with Charismatic, Confident, Commanding.

Another great post, I'm heading over to Jessica's blog now.

Linda G. said...

I can see it as either confidence or charisma. :)

MJ said...

I would say confidence. It is a creepy confidence to control the entire room just by entering!

FilmMattic said...

Charismatic, seeing as her fashionably late entrance was so well received.

BTW, Love the title of your blog!

Marjorie said...

I'm going with confidence. I cheated though. *looks guilty*

Matthew MacNish said...

All these characters start with C!

Tiger85 said...

It's got to be confidence. Like the post. =)

http://tigeronmybookshelf.blogspot.com/

Unknown said...

I would have said glamour, but realised it's a g. So I'd go with charme.
Nahno ∗ McLein

Leovi said...

For most emotion is charisma but that is not an emotion, I think she felt cheerful.

Anonymous said...

cocky :o)

Jennifer Hoffine said...

After reading both passages, I'm guessing confident:)

50 foot QE said...

Confidence is a nice state of mind. Beautifully written here.