Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Box-O-Juicy Words


The countdown is on, and in just five short days my upbeat children will enter again the hallowed halls of elementary and middle schools.  Summer swept us into her sunny whirlpool, leaving us giddy, light-headed, and incredulous that it could possibly be over, already.

And the promise of a quiet house, paramount for writers like me, is tucked in a box on the next page of my week-at-a-glance calendar, waiting like a gift to be opened on the 2nd.

My muse is having a hard time waiting.

To soothe her unsettled soul, I pulled out my Word Box this morning.


This is one of my favorite possessions.  The box itself was made by my mother in her small, basement stained glass studio.  The glass is clear with what looks like embedded scraps in various tints of rose-colored tissue paper and threadlike ribbons of black ink.  The hinged top is inlaid with opaque glass and beveled mirrored.  Mom did a great job soldering the pieces together.  I was heartbroken when one of the kids accidentally knocked it off the coffee table last year, but now I think the crack you see along the front facing side, and the fact that the lid now closes off-centered, adds to the box's life story and charm. 

Inside this box are juicy words.

Last year, I cut narrow strips of colored card stock, and over the course of several weeks I wrote upon them delicious-sounding, descriptive words.  The box stays in a prominent place (but no longer on the dangerous coffee table) where I add to it whenever I hear a vivid or picturesque word.

When Sidney and I cook together, we take turns swishing around the words and pulling two scraps of paper out.  Those words become our names for the evening.  Once I was Pristine Flabbergast, and Sidney was Polite Lovely-Green.

Since Muse is chomping at the bit to write, but I have a three-boy sleepover party ready to awaken at any moment and demand breakfast -- (...did I just hear a toilet flush downstairs?...) -- I decided to share with you my little early morning exercise.




I stirred up the words, infusing the papers with my creative energy, and pulled my hand away.  I wrote a list of all the words I could read without moving the papers:


Treasure
Disturb
Maple rose
Extinguish
Vibrant
Breathe
Loneliness
Frantic
Torch
Filter
Write
Silliness
Wander
Aura
Shoe
Remember


And from the words, I gave myself five minutes to compose a poem.  My rules for this game are it's okay to add short connector words (the, its, than, etc.), and if a word is better used as a different part of speech (silliness [noun] becomes silly [adjective]), change away!  With only five minutes, you really have to muzzle your inner editor and embrace the whimsical results.  Here were mine:


Remember
Filter not the silliness you write
Better to let its vibrant aura breathe
Than extinguish the treasure torch.
And...
...always wear your wander shoes.



I wasn't able to use disturb, frantic, or loneliness.  I guess my energy rejected them.  And Maple Rose missed the creative cut, too.


Feel inspired?  What funky word combinations can you come up with from this list?  (Ex. Frantic Torch)  Can you write a line of poetry using some of these words?  Please share your inspired results in the comments!

41 comments:

Cherie Reich said...

That's really cool! What an awesome idea!

Janet Johnson said...

I'm so impressed! My mind doesn't connect random words for me very well.

Jessica Bell said...

Wow! Aren't you the queen of writing exercises! Ok, here goes ...

With a torch, I write ...
Remember disturbing the lonely shoes wandering frantically through vibrant treasures? Extinguishing its breath - its aura? Filtering 'sillyness' with maple rose?

Liza said...

"Always wear your wander shoes." Lovely!

Anne Gallagher said...

I am in awe of you.

Re: I'm sending you an email about Georgia and the kids going back to school.

Laurel Garver said...

Love it! I've played games like this with a couple magnetic poetry sets I own. What a great way to get the juices flowing.

Unknown said...

Breathe and wander,
disturb not the treasured maple rose.
Torched aura
extinguish
the filtered frantic
silliness of light.

Lola Sharp said...

I LOVE your special, handmade-with-love Word Box! What a lovely use of the glass box your mother made for you. <3

I'm running out the door, so I don't have time to play right now, but I had to tell you how much I love your pretty box-o-words. (and you)

Love,
Lola

Matthew MacNish said...

Beautiful. All of it.

Wendy Ramer, Author said...

I love this entire poem. And I always wear my wander shoes, which is probably why I'm never completely satisfied with my still life.

Do you mind if I post your poem in my sidebar? (Giving you credit, of course)

About Me said...

Aww, cool idea. I'm not much of a poet, but here's my try:

Write Frantic(ally), treasure, remember, silliness

Jemi Fraser said...

What a lovely idea - great job!

Anonymous said...

Lovely idea, and I like the box.

My nickname for the day will now be Vibrant Shoe. xD

Man Named Kim said...

Great idea! we have a 'blessings' jar on our dinning room table. you can select a blessing for the day. today mine was "You are more influential than you think."

Unknown said...

Hi all! I've been offline all day and popped in to check the blog. Wow! I love all your awesome comments and the shared inspirations. You all rock my world!!

XXOO Nicole

Lenny Lee said...

hi miss nicole! wow this is way hard. the best i can do is with just two of the words.

remember to breath! ha ha.

...smiles from lenny

Terry Stonecrop said...

What a beautiful box! And the game is brilliant. Love this idea. I have to try it. Thanks:)

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

Sorry, for some reason, I can't see the images.
I'm still in shock that your kids go back to school the first week of August!

RosieC said...

First, the box is beautiful! Your mother did an amazing job.

I really love the word-box idea. I might have to steal... er... casually borrow it from you :) And the poem is great. Well done for only 5 minutes.

Thanks for coming over to my blog today!

Southpaw said...

Very cool. What a great way to get the creative juices jumping.

~Don’t disturb the maple rose for its loneliness will transfer~

Wow, back to school already. That's good and bad.

Lisa_Gibson said...

I am completely in love with the stained glass box. It's gorgeous!
What a terrific little exercise to limber up your creativity muscles. :)

Shelley Sly said...

LOVE the box, LOVE this idea, and LOVE your poem! How awesome is this! I am terrible at poetry, but this almost makes me want to take a stab at it again, because it looks so fun. Thanks for sharing! :)

notesfromnadir said...

I love the Word Box your mom made. It's a cool exercise.

Sure, I'll use 3 of those words:

breathe vibrant loneliness!

Anonymous said...

Frantic breath disturbs Maple Rose aura,
Extinguishing lonely treasure torch.
Remember.

Uh, well, something like that, anyway. :)

Lovely box, and poem, good lady.

Little Ms J said...

I love words, love seeing them in a box like candy to be picked from... such a great idea.

Kelly Polark said...

I love your word box and the fact that you pick two words at dinnertime. A family treasure for sure!

Charity Bradford said...

First, I'm jealous. My kids don't go back to school until Aug. 25! That's almost a full month to go.

Second, I love your box, what a great idea.

L. Diane Wolfe said...

That's a neat idea. And the box is gorgeous!

Janna Leadbetter said...

How fantastic! Love this. Thanks for sharing.

5 days? I'm blown away by that! I thought our start-date of 8/18 was early.

Glynis Peters said...

What fun! Have you got the words I Want One in your gorgeous box! What a treasure. Well here goes, tried to use only a couple of joining words.

Remember silliness and a shoe, vibrant Maple Rose.
Disburb your aura, treasure it, wander and breathe.
Extinguish loneliness and filter it, write.

Samantha Bennett said...

I think the cooking names are my favorite part. :) I love it!

Unknown said...

I have to say that I'm currently in awe of what you do every morning. What a brilliant way to get your words flowing off the pages! I think I'm going to have to start something like this. It's too special not to!!

I wish I was at home because I would start! Guess it will have to wait for the weekend! Happy Friday!

Mary Aalgaard said...

I love your final line about wearing your wander shoes.

Loneliness Treasure

I like that combo. Sounds like a good title to me.

Kimberly Franklin said...

I love the idea of the word box, plus it's so pretty. What a great exercise!

Happy Friday!!

Susan Fields said...

What a beautiful box! Your mother certainly did do a wonderful job. And you've put it to excellent use.
My kids start school in about a week and a half, and my muse is eagerly anticipating an empty house as well. :)

Vicki Rocho said...

Beautiful box and a really cool idea.

clutterbug said...

I love the box!!! What a super idea. I couldn't think of a rhyme in such a pressure situation... mind you, I only recently wrote one about wine that had to include the words Octopus, Guzzle and Drunk ... not quite the same thing though I am thinking ;)

LTM said...

I love your box, and I love your exercise! I'm also a little jealous that school's starting back so soon for you. We've still got a few more weeks to go... but I HATE feeling that way. They'll grow up so fast, right? :o| sigh.

Pat Tillett said...

Not only a cool idea, but a great poem also!

Erin MacPherson said...

Hi Nicole!! I want MY kids to go back to school... but I still have three weeks *sigh*. I totally get the need-silence thing.

Anonymous said...

I always inspired by you, your thoughts and way of thinking, again, appreciate for this nice post.

- Norman