Just a little concrete poem I wrote a while back.
Hope you enjoy it!
The Call of the Whale
My name is Dylan, “Lover of the Sea.”
Or so my mother hoped I’d always be.
The palm fronds swayed the day that I was born.
And sea gulls screeched their welcome from the shore.
A family of simple needs raised me. Our livelihood was eked out
from the sea. From babe to boy, my playground was the beach;
Observant ocean never failed to teach. But I, unwilling student,
would not hear and dreamed instead of arid west frontier.
Two years of misery in desert quest; I searched for verve
but found I was depressed. ‘Neath empty skies and
cacti's harsh embrace, the ocean ebbed and
pulled me from that place. Thalassic
prodigy returned at last, at
ocean’s edge I stood and
viewed my past: I was
the whale compelled
to breathe fresh air,
an orcan idealist
lunged, unaware.
In reckless flight I'd faced a basic fact. A whale lives under
contract most exact. I’m from the sea and it’s a part of me;
My salty tears were proof and guarantee.
Have a wonderful day!
15 comments:
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I very much enjoyed your poem! I'm glad I decided to blog hop instead of open my word document...! christy
You have a wonderful flow in this poem and the actual images that go with it are really well done. thank you for sharing.
The last line made me actually tear up. I can identify with being in the wrong place, and this describes it perfectly (literally and figuratively). Loved it.
Lovely :O)
Very beautiful! I love how you put it together, too. Thanks for sharing!
Hope you and your family are enjoying the summer! Take care...:)
I love this! It's amazing how you got it all into the shape of a whale tale. :)
Such a lovely visual reminds me of ee cumming. Great job!
Very nice and very good Nicole!
I really enjoyed it.
I love this poem! But you already know that! :o)
That's a lovely poem. Very touching.
This is beautiful and so creative!! Thanks so much for sharing, Nicole! :)
What an amazing, creative poem, Nicole.
Have a great weekend.
Wow, I loved it! Just looking at it filled me with creative joy :) really lovely! Thank you for sharing this one! Have a nice weekend - I hope I'll come back soon.
Wow - amazing, Nicole! Loved the visual appeal, too.
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