Today Jessica Bell and I are showcasing excerpts we wrote for a prompt word that starts with 'P.' After reading the passage below, can you determine which emotion/feeling/state of mind I've depicted? After you guess in the comments, please follow the link to Jessica's blog and read her offering!
Though Jonathon and Bobby were fraternal twins, their lives were one long string of competitions. Bobby was a minute y0unger, a quarter of an inch shorter, and a half a grade point average behind his brother. And Jonathon enjoyed reminding him.
They’d trained together for months for the half-marathon, and for the first time ever Bobby was the stronger. On the track or in the gym, he out-sprinted and out-lifted Jonathon. This time, he was going to be victorious.
But as they flew across the finish line the day of the race, Jonathon’s chest broke the plane a half second before Bobby’s.
Bobby bent over with his hands on his thighs and hung his head, gasping for breath. Panting, Jonathon clapped a hand on his shoulder.
“Don’t take it too hard, bro,” he gloated. “Even I thought you were going to beat me, for a minute there.”
So, what 'P' emotion/feeling/state of mind does this excerpt make you think of? Thanks for reading and here's a link to Jessica's blog. See you over there!
12 comments:
This one's tough! Patronize? (or the noun, patronization)
:o) xoxo
These are so much fun. But I'm going to agree with Laura.
My first thought is patronize, the next - pissed off!
Ooh, I'm going with the others.
On Jessica's post I said Polite. I'm not so sure...it's the 'he gloated' that stirs the pot...a patronizing/suck up person wouldn't gloat. Final decision: prideful.
Yeah, I'm thinking he sounds a little patronizing, too.
My guess is patronizing. This one was definitely tough!
You're welcome, Nicole!
And patronizing is probably correct, although I can think of another short P word to describe Bobby's brother...
I agree with patronise.
I'm with Alex. There is one P word to describe the brother. I'll have to head over to Jessica's blog to see if I still feel patronizing is correct.
it's got to be persistence. But those brothers. Man! :D xoxo
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