Monday, April 19, 2010

Pattycake, Pattycake

Saturday as I was making this cake for my daughter's tenth birthday party, I was reminded of a blog comment conversation I had with Jessica of The Alliterative Allomorph. It was the day I posted about not being able to shut off my inner editor and embrace the imperfection of the first draft. That day, Jessica said this in her comment:

"You need to stop thinking and just write the basics...right NOW, think about what's necessary. You can come back LATER and turn it into beautifully crafted prose. Think of it like sketching a cartoon. You start of with the rough pencil outline, then you add the thick black outline which defines its shape and structure, then you colour it in, giving it life, personality, atmosphere."

Put that way, what Jessica was saying sunk in. And it was this analogy that I thought about as I made Sidney's cake.

Approaching a cake project is very like beginning a novel. I got out all my ingredients and organized them neatly on the counter. [characters, plot ideas, turning points, climax, ending]

I mixed up the batter and baked the cakes. When the were out of the pans and cooled, I leveled off each layer so the tops were flat. [rough outline: when you can start to "see" what the finished story will look like]

Next, I torted each layer, which means I sliced each in half so that the three tiered cake would have six layers. By this time I'd cleaned up my work space several times, but my nice, organized ingredients were all over the place -- just like my final outline: "Organized Chaos!"

I mixed up a batch of plain, white buttercream frosting for the crumb coat. This step I most liken to the first draft of my novel. The crumb coat is when you prepare each of the three torted cake tiers. One by one, you frost each bottom layer then carefully place on its top. Next, you apply a very thin, smooth coating of frosting along the sides and top of each layer. When you're finished, you have three individual layered cakes, of different sizes.

The crumb coat is important because it adheres to it all the loose crumbs, so that when you frost the cake with colored icing no crumbs show through, preventing color and texture blemishes. When you assemble the three tiers with their crumb coats, the cake looks like a cake, but it's plain, white, uninspired. However, it's well constructed and ready for embellishment -- when the real magic begins.

Isn't that like the first draft? A rough draft is the place where you get the bones of the story down, get all the characters and plot points in place, build a sound structure. Like the crumb coat, the first draft is part of the artistry, though you may not embrace it for the beautiful work of art it will become during the last stages of the project: the embellishments, the icing on the cake, the writer's flourish.

One last thing I observed with this cake: Each new cake I bake is superior to the last. I put the same effort into each one, the same dedication to perfection. But with practice, the moisture of the cake is better each time, the texture of the buttercream frosting is firmer and creamier. I reach more instinctively for the right piping tips I need to make this flower or that border. This is so like writing, too. The more I write, the more the words flow with an elevated ease, the less I rewrite, and the quicker the metaphors come to my descriptions. Practice hones a craft, in deep-seated ways of which the conscious mind is unaware.

Thank you, Jessica, for sharing your insight that day, giving me something to ponder over another of my creative passions. If anyone has not visited The Alliterative Allomorph, scoot over there now and enjoy Jessica's wonderful insights and incredible talent for writing.


Have a wonderful day!

49 comments:

Jessica Bell said...

Oh my goodness you should see how much I'm blushing right now!!!!! LOL. You are the definition of a 'Gem'. Not only am I thoroughly pleased that my comment changed your way of approching that first draft, but I'm absolutely thrilled that it effected you to the point of actually BLOGGING about it! Wow! I can't thank you enough. You've just boosted my self-esteem 100-fold! AHHHHH! KISSES in millions floating your way as we speak ... (well type). :)

Anne Gallagher said...

I am so hungry right now! Great post Nicole but where's the picture of the cake? I want to see it.

Unknown said...

Jessica~ You're so sweet!! Thanks for everything!

Anne~ The cake pictured is the cake I made! You like it?

Alex J. Cavanaugh said...

So true. As with any artistic creation, it won't be perfect right out of the gate. Think of the first draft as a preliminary sketch.

Unknown said...

Wow! You made that cake? It's amazing! You are so talented.

Aubrie said...

That is a beautiful cake! Wow, I'm impressed. Each short sotry and novel that I write is better than the last. Great anology.

Kelsey (Dominique) Ridge said...

Great post. Love the analogy. :)

Patti said...

Wow, your daughter is very lucky to have a talented mother. Nice analogy.

Charity Bradford said...

Beautiful cake Nicole! I loved your analogy too. We should swap cake recipes sometimes. Have you visited my cake blog? I haven't updated it in forever, but do have a wedding cake coming up in June.

*sigh* Maybe you can add to your analogy--When you don't practice your craft (or take an extended break) it feels like starting all over again. More mistakes until you find your groove again. I'd better start practicing. :)

Wendy Ramer, Author said...

Love the metaphor, but I'm afraid I'd be huge if I thought about this post every time I worked through a project ;-)

Stina said...

Wow, you made that cake! I had to buy my daughter's from the grocery store because mine look like natural disasters. Great for my 10 yo who's into natural diasters. Not so great when your daughter's theme is the Disney Princesses. ;)

Anonymous said...

I think of writing as a box of Betty Crocker cake mix. I have no idea what's in it, or where it comes from, but the end result is rather tasty (and occasionally leaves a bad taste in my mouth).

I think your analogy's better, quite frankly.

Lindsey Duncan said...

Beautiful cake - and great analogy.

Crystal Cook said...

Holy beautiful cake!! That is stunning! And I love the analogy, it hit home :)

Thanks for this!

Rebecca T. said...

that's such a great analogy. And I am impressed with your cake making ability!

Southpaw said...
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Southpaw said...

Did someone say something about cake?

Shannon O'Donnell said...

WOW! I can't believe you made that cake - it's gorgeous!

And I totally LOVE the cake baking analogy. :-)

Laura S. said...

Excellent analogy! Your daughter's birthday cake looks super yummy!

Unknown said...

Alex~ I totally agree!

Julie~ Thank you, sweets!

Aubrie~ I found the same true with my short fiction, and I anticipate (hope) it'll be true with my longer works.

Dominique~ Thank you!!

Patti~ Aww, thank you!

Unknown said...

Charity~ WOW! Your cakes are GORGEOUS! That topsy-turvy wedding cake blew my socks off! I haven't tried one of those...yet! I have pics of two other cakes I did on my page called "Beyond My Profile" (upper right corner of my blog).

Thanks for sharing your cake blog link. Can't wait to see the wedding cake this summer!

Wendy~ Speaking of, I ate way too much buttercream frosting this weekend. Ugh. Bloat.

Stina~ LOL! Oh yes, I've perfected the natural disaster cake too!

Unknown said...

Simon~ ROFL!! That is a hilarious analogy!!

Lindsay~ Thank you!

Crystal~ Thank you so much!

Rebecca~ Thanks!!!

Southpaw~ Come on over, there's still some left!

Shannon~ Thank you!! :)

Laura~ Thank you! It really was as yummy as it looks, too! :)

Jai Joshi said...

Great analogy, Nicole. The creative process, no matter what you're creating, is always very similar.

That cake looks unbelieveably good! I love cake!

Jai

Lydia Kang said...

that's an incredible cake you made! Wow! And the metaphor is totally true. Although the idea of "cake revising" sounds a bit messy :)

B. Miller said...

Wonderful post! I loved this analogy. And that cake looks delicious! Hope your little one had a great birthday. Good luck with your first draft!!

Kirsten Lesko said...

Did you honestly make that cake? Are you a professional baker or something? It's beautiful.

Love the analogy to writing.

Kimberly Franklin said...

That cake is beautiful!!!

Tonya said...

Even though I'm not a writer and don't know much about the process, this analogy made so much sense to me. One thing I do know...that cake was beautiful and DELICIOUS!!!

Shannon said...

Excellent post and that cake is amazing! It looks fantastic!

Julie Musil said...

Are you kidding me with that cake? Holy cow. Now I feel bad about what I serve my kids for their birthdays. LOVE the cake/draft connection.

sarahjayne smythe said...

Great post, beautiful cake. :) I love your blog.

Julie Dao said...

Holy cow, you are one talented lady, Nicole!! That is a BEAUTIFUL cake. It's one of those cakes that I'd be afraid to eat because it's so pretty :) Love the analogy, too - I wish I could finish baking and just get to the fun decorating part!

Talli Roland said...

YOU MADE THAT CAKE?

I am SO impressed! I'm even more impressed with how you've turned it into writing. What a great analogy.

Terry Stonecrop said...

Gorgeous cake and great analogy! The advice was good.

KA said...

I can never aspire to be the cake-making domestic goddess you obviously are (hey, the kids got both breakfast and lunch today--it's a miracle).

Anne Gallagher said...

Nicole -- I'm so sorry, I don't know what I was thinking, obviously I wasn't. I was so enthralled with your DESCRIPTION of the cake and how you used it to go along with your writing, I totally missed the picture. It was a beautiful cake. And I still want a piece.

Paul C said...

That's something to aspire to: some writing that's as delectable as your cake.

Nevine Sultan said...

You used an excellent analogy, comparing baking a cake to writing a novel. It feels like it will be such an arduous task, but once you're on the road, into it, there's no stopping. And then the fixups can be taken care of later!

Nevine

Jaydee Morgan said...

Great analogy and awesome cake! Your talent abounds.

Unknown said...

You have an amazing post when you mix food and writing in one and you nailed it!!! What a great post! I loved it, can we have some cake now?

Shelley Sly said...

WOW! 1) That is a perfect analogy! A true writer would think that way, and I think that's brilliant. and 2) That cake looks incredible! Your daughter is very lucky. :D Fabulous, Nicole!

Carolina M. Valdez Schneider said...

My dear, I'm now convinced there is nothing you can't do. That cake is amazing. Loved your analogy, by the way. For a couple of years, I stopped writing. Just lost all motivation. But I baked and baked until I must have gained 20 pounds. Ha. I suppose there is a definite connection between the two--the need to create something from scratch, to build it up, add to it, get just the perfect mix of ingredients to produces something beautiful and enjoyable.


Now, lets cut the cake. I've got a roaring sweet tooth ;)

Christi Goddard said...

See, sometimes I see my completed cake and I just want to snatch up a knife and start hacking away it. Storm out to the garage for the chainsaw. Rent a steamroller. Wrap a couple bricks to it and toss it in the river...

Charmaine Clancy said...

Beautiful cake and great allegory to go with it!

Little Ms J said...

Talented!

Kelly said...

Wonderful analogy! That cake is amazing! You are so talented!

Mary Aalgaard said...

Your cake is amazing and I love how you compare it to your writing. I was thinking about comparing it to playing piano. It seems like we're harder on ourselves in our writing life than in other areas. We KNOW we need to practice things like piano, and cake making, and a sport, so why would we think that we'd get writing perfect the first try? Thanks!

Lola Sharp said...

That is one yummy looking, gorgeous cake, Nic!!

You know how Homer is with Duff beer?
Cake is my Duff.
I LOVE cake. More than any other food. I'd marry cake.

I'm glad you took pictures of that cake, so she will always remember how much work you put not it, just for her special day.

Happy birthday to your daughter.

Hannah said...

that is such a great way of looking at it! Thank you for this!

and seriously, my birthday is next month...

I'm off to find me some cake to eat.